you can state your opinion but no arguing because bottom line is that this is a opinion and only a opinion.
i thought it was about time i added a list of fan characters from Deviantart that i thought was the most thought out in character development or in this case from what i can tell from a bio. this doesn't mean i love or hate someone's work or writing technique, it just means to their worlds environments, do the characters fit well?
10. rex centauri
thoughts on rex?--->well if i had to say it i would look at rex as a anti sue character, because he is far in the limits of his own environments and still has overwhelming disadvantages that out play his perks, like not being fast and incredible heavy on top of that making it near impossible for him to swim(i think). though i feel as though he is trying too hard to make himself a "underdog" he doesn't really fit the description because of the fact that he is quite likable to the people in his universe and even has a father that was quote on quote "a great hero" meaning that honestly some type of expectation is held towards this character. to which for a "underdog" expectations are not held well towards them, at least not positively. and i have to say, i am a fan of his relatively simple design.
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9. zeki the cat
thoughts on zeki?---> well i will say zeki would be higher on the list if i knew more about her character and her environment and how well she fits in. but i like her character's psyche because you can obviously tell that her own confusion on her origin is conflicting her but she strides to try to keep together her present as well and doesn't brood on what could have been her present even though she brings it up. since this is the only thing i can infer about zeki's development i can't put her higher on the list like i wanted to.
what i think could be done better with zeki is flushing out her origin a little more that what she has been raised to be but i think eventually her owner will do this. all though i am aware that zeki is not the main character but by definition she is a deuteragonist so i think it's fair to give her credit.
8. bloodshed the hedgehog
thoughts on bloodshed?---> well like zeki i wanted to put him higher on the list because of how much i like the character. but due to my lack of knowledge to his ACTUAL story i can't really make a proper conclusion. though i do know that his abilities and characters are inspired by multiple things that he works together in multiple ways to his own advantage and style which i find funny cause many people do that and just plain rip off what they are trying to make different with there own twist, for this fact alone that blood can do this and make it fresh is why i put him on this list not only being a remediable character and memorable.
7. striker the hedgehog (R.I.P by the way)
thoughts on striker?---> well i know everything about this guy but his creator keeps changing him randomly and he was originally was going to be a major character in my "NeXtGen" series anime comic, but he never got around to finalizing it and i ended up writing the story without him in it caaaaaause he was scrapped so i might make a reference to him in my comic,but besides petty nostalgia i felt as though striker never was out of his own world because ironically his world was also neon's at one point, where each and every character was as strong as any of the others without stupidly avoiding all of the worlds obstacles making him the most "average" in the group.
his story is a unusual one but he does technically fit in his world so he gets a pass for me, sadly he is scrapped now.
never said they all had to be sonic franchise
thoughts on Iito?---> well i do know he is the first on this list to be finished as a character xD
so i do believe his series is a very light hearted one with a lesson on heritage and inner conflict about that heritage, the fact that this is a somewhat action filled series with moral choices and colorful characters with colorful personalities just screams adventure to me. so having a character thats more fascinated with the world around him rather than himself really fits Iito as a developing character,plus the name Iito is cool. down side is i don't really see anything original with the lay outs of Iito's abilities and powers which might make getting into his series kinda stale cause i already know what to expect in terms of powers. but i look forward to Iito's story.
5. seth the hedgehog
thoughts on seth?--->seth is another which is i think now a bit prematurely finished.
i love the set up of seth universe and the weapons and enemies in his universe, to wear he is weaker than his enemies but somehow still manages to win type of character, which can get frustrating if there isn't always a justifyable reason why he can top characters stronger than him, this can be interpreted two ways, as being plot armor, or can be connected through the stories plot. which i have yet to see.
my only problem with seth is that he is a great lead role but there's not path that lead him there, no back story, i feel this would make him a more understandable character if we had a story to why seth never gave up or why he fights till he isn't able too move physically, his actions lack a clear motive and summing it down to "protecting his friends" can't always be this answer(unless he wants it to be) cause someone that wants to protect everyone will be faced with the time when they realize that is impossible to accomplish no matter how hard you fight. i feel as though if seth's creator can make seth have this realization by losing a character seth promised to protect either in the present or past(due to that characters own blind belief in seths words) then we can understand his stride to be powerful that lead him to be a leader and rival to many like my character kevin. but that's just me.
again remember i'm not bashing anyone's story just saying what i like about there direction and where i personally would like it to end up, you guys don't even have to listen to me xD.
oh by the way i can't add to the list characters who's personalities or bio's are not decided on yet so i'm sorry to the people this may included even though i wanted to add you so bad.
to be continued in the next part.
4. chloe's entire roster of characters chloecat194.deviantart.com/gal…
mainly because of her story
it's a EXE comic that has characters that ALL in there own special way break logic, to which this is good because breaking logic is the logic of this comic xD in this setup, the characters chemistry is super important and most of the time their fights or emotions have to compensate with each other, giving them a ROCK,PAPER,SCISSORS type of relation not to mention (hopefully some high moralistic type of art and visual confusion to help) any way the key to making this comic work is making the characters vastly different.
3. cris the hedgehog
thoughts on cris?---> well it's obvious that cris is the main character, BUT he is incredible unrealistic cause honestly he is tossed into a world he doesn't understand AND is turned into a animal but he doesn't freakout of long, instantly trust the people around him and even falls in love with a animal from that universe at first glance to which the last time a hedgehog feel in love with a human people hated it(sonic x elise)
what i would love to see for cris is a personality that suits his situation,you can't be happy or satified with the creatures around you or join them unless you know what is going on, to which none of the canon characters explain but he just jumps in and falls in love. also PLOT ARMOR POWERS NEED TO HAVE A SOURCE, he has powers but they only show when he is a animal not human, this hidden confusion that will obviously surface at a terrible time needs to be explained....if it is then this comic will be amazing
(continued in part 3) xD